Extra Credit Story-The Ultimate Battle

Ok, since I have nothing better to do, I'm writing an extra-credit story for school it goes like this..... "The Ultimate Battle"
INTRO-Along Time Ago (Actually its last month but anyway,) in a planet kind of more far than Mars but civilization like us that’s not able to see by our planet. There was a war between mythological creatures and humans. Obviously, the humans were losing because of lack of defense and offense.
CHAPTER1 One day a wizard named Charlie was in his cave (Because he was too poor to afford a house, but still had money to buy furniture and stuff.) calling his brother on his shell phone, but his brother didn't answer. "That's strange. Brother is usually always home when I call him. Let me investigate." Charlie thought. So he hopped on his magical cloud named Cloud. and went flying off to his brother's house. (Charlie's brother is named brother.)While flying Charlie and Cloud saw two people playing with a bunch of cards in a small park. Then, he saw a giant Cyclops destroying a city. What a peaceful view." Charlie said. After a few minutes...."I wonder why it takes so long to get there." Charlie asked Cloud. "Well technically we live in a cave in a rain forest and he lives on the country side." "Oh I get it now." Finally after four minutes of watching "peaceful views" Charlie and Cloud successfully made it to Brother's house. "What the?!" Charlie and Cloud said at the same time. Brother'sZZZZzzzz Uuuuh? What? Sorry I think I dozed of because of last night’s party. Now, back to the story. STAY TUNED FOR CHAPTER TWO IN A SHORT WHILE! (DAYS)